in the mood

from ‘Periodic System of Being’

 

lonesome

unwanted

abandoned

cared and loved

by no one

as that kid

on the bench

  in the rain -

the way

the Creator

was feeling

while making

the place

we live in

Reviews

[Meliss@k]

Wow... How depressing lol
Good thing this isn't true though and we all have a purpose and that everything happens/happened for a specific reason :)

Great write

[MOON]

Poignant thought provoking write. Lovely.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

What an unusual idea for a poem - what the Creator was thinking when he made the earth and peopled it. He must have been pretty lonesome...maybe that is why he allows us to lose loved ones, so that we can feel and appreciate what we have/had.

[Marie]

How beautiful and whole sounding...

[J. J. Nightingale]

And then he made man, and woman .. . To Love and to be loved, in return ..

Beautiful thoughts .. J.