Cliff and Rainbow

from ‘With You and Without’

 

sometimes i feel myself

a feather-grassed grey-haired cliff

above the ocean

 

and you come here

as a lively rainbow after storm

and hug me gently

Reviews

[Meliss@k]

So beautiful. Your choice of words, how well everything flows, the length of the poem... It was perfect. How you ended this poem reminde me a bit of how I ended one of my own, "Kiss On My Cheek".

This poem is probably one of my favorites

[Rahul]

your imaginary's great....nice piece, totally awesome !

[Archia]

The imagery was really beautiful, even if it took me awhile to completely figure it out. That "a feather-grassed grey-haired cliff" was so wonderful, everything that it brought; the tone, the image, it was all so great. Really enjoyable poem, and I loved the meaning.

[Matt "Mickey" Denney]

Awesome imagery, my friend! :) Keep writing!

[Marie]

Very sweet and light...a feathery rainbow...

[J. J. Nightingale]

So beautiful .. We all need gently .. Love goes where it is needed .. And touches with care .. A rainbow means, Never Forgotten .. ..

I love it .. J.

[Renée]

Brings a smile to the face.. Lovely !