music of yours

from ‘With You and Without’

 

a butterfly’s wings

or a swallow’s

 a seagull’s inaudible flight -

your hands

that are flittering lively

together with their

grey shadows

over black and white

ivory keys

 

when i close my inflamed

eyelids

you are flying to me

and i feel

mesmerizing music

of yours

on my passionate skin

on my body

that is loved by you so

ecstatically

Author's Note

the picture by Timour Abdulov

Reviews

[Bare trees]

An excellent description that unveils the layers of your desires through the use of observation and creativity. A wonderful job.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You certainly know how to please your reader!

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

awesome :-)

Isn't that how precious love in silence could be? impressive, lovely, rich, and full of passion, reaching out, yearning, and finally get their translation within the essence of all what matters.... Nice work of poetry here! Thumbs up!

[MOON]

Beautiful a song played with loving hands .

[Marie]

Wings are like hands...beautiful hands...

[Renée]

( : lovely

[J. J. Nightingale]

Ahhh .. those notes of Love .. fly so far .. and touch so deeply ..

Beautiful .. Jasmine