Terra of love
A Poem by
Igor G. Balatsky
from ‘The Lady of Fall’
From the bottom
of your lotus feet
To the top of your
delicate heart
Is the terra
of my tardy love
© 2012 Igor G. Balatsky
Author's Note
A poem should have some enigma.
Why is his love tardy? I wish he had met her before.
And yet, better late than never.
Reviews
She is beautiful indeed...and delicately lovely...which gives her the right to be tardy?
Posted 12 Years Ago
right! from the feet to the heart is a love zone, head is not included!!! all the problems people have just because they trust their mind too much :) there is no head in love! I love the simple beauty of this poem!
Posted 12 Years Ago
right! from the feet to the heart is a love zone, head is not included!!! all the problems people have just because they trust their mind too much :) there is no head in love! I love the simple beauty of this poem!
LOVELY .. BEAUTIFUL .. BUT WHY TARDY ? .. PERHAPS YOU WERE SLOW TO KNOW LOVE...
JAZZY :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
LOVELY .. BEAUTIFUL .. BUT WHY TARDY ? .. PERHAPS YOU WERE SLOW TO KNOW LOVE...
JAZZY :)
Yes, I was wondering why your love was tardy. This is lovely.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Yes, I was wondering why your love was tardy. This is lovely.
You have a lot of skill in beauty.
Of course, you leave the witness wondering, why is your love tardy?
Posted 12 Years Ago
You have a lot of skill in beauty.
Of course, you leave the witness wondering, why is your love tardy?
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Added on April 10, 2012
Last Updated on April 10, 2012
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