In Your Eyes

from ‘Amalgam’

 

Watching the world

outside my window

I draw the conclusion:

it is unreal.

 

Watching the world

inside my door

I understand:

it’s a kind of fiction.

 

But when I gaze

into your angel eyes

I realize a very simple thing:

 

It is the only real place

where I can see

the evident truth

and find so long-desired

peace of my troubled mind.

Reviews

[Wendy Seames Garner]

What a wonderful poem, Igor. That is the type of relationship we all long for.

[A. Lee]

Stunning work. Absolutely heart felt and extremely well-written.

[MOON]

True love the real truth.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I LOVE THIS, AND I CAN SURELY RELATE .. .. TO SEE TRUTH IN A LOVED ONES EYES , HAS TO BE THE GREATEST PEACE OF ALL ...

BEAUTIFUL .. JASMINE

[...]

. real and surreal ...
. beautiful writing ...

[emmajoy]

Beauty in the eyes of an adoring beholder - now, that's what love should be.

Seems you write near effortlessly yet surely English isn't your first language - amazing!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Watching the world from outside of a window, can seem unreal at times.
What is real is the love felt through the eyes of someone you love...the peace that you get, from the stability of that love... Nice write!

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

I concur with Marie. Love is a many splendored thing. All you need is love! All you need is love! All you need is love, love, love! Love is all you need!
Love lifts us up where we belong. Where eagles cry on a mountain high!

Some people want to fill the world with silly love songs. Well what's wrong with that, I'd like to know, cause here I go again! IIIIIII Llllove yoooou!


Yep, love must be a great thing if people write so many songs about it, and it feels so good inside!

[Marie]

Lovely. Some times the only real truth is found in love.

That last stanza says it all, there you recognize true love. Wonderful write again!