Remembrance

A sonnet-renga from 'Hanamichi'

 

Candles of chestnuts

Burn in my mind and my heart

Not in the gardens

 

Daffodils' fragrance

Dwells in the light of spring bliss

Now and forever

 

Spring lively beamed with delight - 

Autumn's in fire

Where has May disappeared? 

Willow is crying

 

Author's Note

one my early experiments in 'album sonnet-renga', when
I used to count syllables: 5-7-5 / 5-7-5 / 7-5-7-5 (dactyl)

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

Beautiful thoughts ..
We may have said it with different words, in English .. but they would have not been more beautiful, than yours .. ...

Jasmine .. x

[Marie]

I don't understand. The last verse is 7-4-6-4. Maybe you meant something I don't see.

I think it's "Where 'has' May disappeared."
Nice seasonal images.