the way of grass

the way of grass

A Poem by Igor G. Balatsky
"

from 'Footprints in the Sand'

"

 

*

the way of grass

is so delightful

 

we tread the melting stars

 

two humming-birds

are moving slowly

 

to another shore

of eternity

 

*

© 2012 Igor G. Balatsky


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Always, very good. The line "we step the melting stars" doesn't seem quite right to me; I've thought of "we tred the melting stars" or "we step on melting stars" but your version is better than either of them.

Posted 12 Years Ago


BEAUTIFUL, AS ALWAYS .. ..

JASMINE :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Igor G. Balatsky
Igor G. Balatsky

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