Skylark

from 'Hanamichi'

 

Skylark above me

learning to fly. For my dreams

perfect instructor

 

Reviews

[Marie]

Lovely description of a skylark who can teach someone how to fly.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Delicate as feathers .. .. Dreams are of heaven .. and free to be, as a bird in flight ..

I like your thoughts .. Jasmine

[reflectingus]

Though much words aren't used, the idea is large enough, and so honest. I love how you have taken this beautiful bird as an example of inspiration, and this is completely intrinsic to the connotation of dreams behind it. This haiku is a great piece, very uplifting, and powerful and simple enough to be engraved pretty deep in my brain. Haha, great job :)

[Mockingbird]

learning to fly takes a long process to achieve flight. so may achieving our dreams can also be a slow journey. we can take the skylark as an example for patience and achievement.

[AK]

Very nice;D
You expressed so much emotion in a mere three lines. Skylark...