About birds

From 'Entropy of Love'

She asked me yesterday

while resting on my chest,

Please, tell me, sweet,

what do you think I am  

among the all variety of birds?

I thought for instant,

smiled and then replied,

You are my swan

with gentle snow-white wings.

And what about me?

I asked her.

You are my little

thoughtful fluffy penguin,

she whispered softly

in the arms of Morpheus.

 

Author's Note

She is so unpredictable sometimes! In spite of everything I love that. )

Reviews

[Marie]

Oh that's sweet. The bird analogy is so great.

[Bourbon Key]

I've known women like that...playful deprecation. Again, I wouldn't respect a woman who flatters me with, "you are an Eagle." She's a keeper.

[J. J. Nightingale]

How sweet .. You are her dream maker .. the soft and fluffy penguin ..

So beautiful ..

Jasmine ..

[Emily B]

sometimes conversation is poetry lived out loud

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple yet very involved, a well written piece, well done, good read.