Surrender

From 'The Island of Slumbers'

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 Arms are wings

Voice is song

Hair's wind

 

Having been

Captivated by you

I've forgotten

The matter of freedom
 

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Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I often write with a brevity of words. I don't feel the need to fill a page with verse...I think the attentive nature of the reader gets lost.

You speak beautifully, and poetically, no matter the volume!

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Absolutely perfect .. Having one's heart captivated .. a lovely way to live ..

Jasmine ..

[symmetryAsymmetry]

wah wah!!
amazingly witty...a delicious presentation for the hungry reader!
perfect poetry... :-)

[Marie]

Short, succinct. You get such meaning into so few words.