faith

 

he used to dream

and yet he had his faith

 

and every shabby mat

on which he prayed

 

became for him

the magic carpet ride

 

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

The brevity of this only adds to its beauty...I love your closing line!


My best,
Kelly

[J. J. Nightingale]

I LOVE THIS .. .. A MAN OF FAITH, AND DREAMS .....

I DID ENJOY .. JASMINE

[Marie]

Wonderful. Makes a proud statement. One suggestion:
Instead of "and even shabby mat" shouldn't it be "every shabby mat?"