If only

'With You and Without' (2011)

 

If only

I became a wind

a rain or just a cloud

 

If only

I became a bird

to spread my hungry wings

in the far distant flight

to the edge of my

dreaming

 

I'm nothing

but a sunbeam

that wakes you up in the morn

 

I'm just a song

that always sounds in your heart

which is so far apart

but is never

alone

 

Reviews

[symmetryAsymmetry]

This is great poetry! You are a great poet!
I'm such a huge fan! This is how I wanna write too!!

[J. J. Nightingale]

THE LAST STANZA TOUCHES .. AND I KNOW THAT SONG ..
FAR-APART .. BUT NEVER ALONE ..

WARM ... JASMINE

[emmajoy]

If only .. like a prayer, a wish, a dream. So many people have said and will say those words, ' If only' .. but maybe not as beautifully as you. 'The second stanza is full of love, superbly so.

[Muse]

This has an ethereal quality. Your words are like feeding a humming bird...wispy...airy...and full of song. Wonderful penning

[Marie]

is no small thing...A lyrical quality. Your poems are formed so nicely. To be "just" a sunbeam or a song