Lost

From 'The Way of Grass'

The ones

 

who strayed from the road

to paradise

the prodigal children

of love that was denied

We are the strangers

in the rain of tears

weeping

with the tears of rain

 

Lost...

Reviews

[MOON]

Poignant.

[Marie]

How sad and touching. This phrase is nice: "in the rain of tears/weeping/with the tears of rain".

[patrickdoromal]

great write. quite expressive even in its simplicty