Sweet Honeymoon

 

 May honeymoon...

it was so bright but fast

like midnight dream.

 

All now remains

the lonely rainy fall -

the end of bliss.

 

My heart reminds

your soul's gentle touch

 and tender kiss...

 

Reviews

[symmetryAsymmetry]

Whole lifespans of memory are shaded in the hue of those few moments...its almost like a separate life running parallel to this one.
If your poetry reflects the love you actually feel...the object of your love must be the luckiest person in the world.

[J. J. Nightingale]

A honeymoon .. quickly gone like a midnight dream ... and just loneliness like rain falls ..
A heart remembers the gentle touch and tender kiss .. of love

I love this .. Jasmine