if you think

push
make these pieces fit.
I dare you..
push me..
make me fit into you...
I dare you.
Maybe you havent met me yet,
but then again... maybe you have
have you seen the fire in my eyes?
have you seen the dead in me?
push this
repair this...
i dare you.
make you fit into me.
have you met the sadness?
have you seen the daylight in my soul?
I dare you..
travel deeper...
if i let you

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

i really enjoyed this, very powerful, full of anger as if daring the reader,"keep pushing me, keep trying to break me" though i do sense a bit of sorrow in this.this poem is exquisitely written, i love the flow of this poem, great job. thanks for reviewing "Betrayed"

[Kriss_Rose]

Wow! There's something so powerful about this. So many interpretations of these emotions. Be who you are because that person is strong and beautiful. Great writing my friend.