Tears

A gray towel hangs from the line. The string twinges as drops of soap hit the concrete floor. 

Reviews

[Iika]

Less is more. I really like this one. To my ear "a gray towel" would suit the mood of this poem even better though, making it just any gray towel, not a specific one. It would sound less significant, one of many. & I love the title, it's so simple yet adds such a deep level of meaning to the image here.