venus.

venus.

A Poem by idontknowanymore

We burned out like a candle left alight in a drunkards bathroom at dawn.
It's sad really but I don't know what else to do.
I've become entangled in your web and all you've left to do is prey upon me.
You're so hypnotizing and I?
I'm vulnerable to your powers.
You don't want me to love,
You want me to sit, worship, and wait.
And here I am.
d.g.

© 2018 idontknowanymore


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And here you are with straight strong message. Waking into reality where is so many traps and painful experiences. I like you how make nice flow with your message. Also poem is not about too much happy event. I feel some kind of calm mood .

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on December 30, 2017
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