Feeling

IDK yet...just read it!

I feel alone...why do I feel this way?

I don't know the answer, please help me.

I feel bored, alone, depressed, upset, and dead inside, all at the same time.

There is no way to describe my feelings.

Can you help me?

Why do I ask these questions, no one can save me

Theres no point trying

Theres no possible way to save the broken...the beaten...the damned

The pain I feel from the cool blade sliding acrost my wrist

A sweeter feeling then the knowing of death

Many believe that death is coming in 2012

All I can do is hope, pray, and wish...

 

Reviews

[Tiff-AH!-knee�]

um, you guys... he spelt it "PRAY", lol.
wow, i love you guys.

anyway, adam. this is really good. i really like it. but instead of saying the 2012 thing maybe you could say..
um... "frail people fear the apocalypse, i can only hope, pray, and wish." I don't know?
I don't really write about the world ending or other people or anything...im more of a depressed type of person, blah, blah, i hate my life. that's my writing :)

anyway adam, good job.

[*Evelen*]

Wow you really made the reader feel your pain. It's a very good poem.

[Courtney Elizabeth]

i like it man i agree with haley. prey is spelt pray silly goose! but its great other then tht! :)

[hayhay]

prey is what you hunt dude.

[hayhay]

prey is spelt pray. and i dont like the end the rest was okay