signs of fall

this is the fall poem to go along with the winter one I wrote earlier

He walks through trees

And in their dying moments he comes to life

For it’s his time

They reveal their truest colours only to him

The browns, reds and gold’s

And with him comes the cold

Because he tries to escape the chill inside

He is forever running from the frozen, death that follows him

Nature knows his signs but we thought the change was beautiful

We didn’t know he was a warning

We were not told of the shadows close behind him

What we thought was a beautiful change

Was only beauty in death

He is a sign of nature falling into darkness

He is a warning of what will come

We call him fall

Reviews

[Hebe]

What a great image and approach you created for the season change, I felt transported in the forest and suddenly feeling the chill ...Congratulations for the award :)

[maria ( rose)]

Bravo ! Love the whole concept "Signs of Fall'' with a crispy treat ending :)
Just reading a few poems/stories that were entered into my ''Autumnal Contest'' Thank you for entering & Good Luck my friend:)
Keep up the great work!!!
Maria