King

inspired by smaug's song by karliene

never underestimate someone with no fire in their eyes

don't assume becuse you can't see my flame I can't burn you

I will rain on you like a storm of acid

I don't need ice 

fear will keep you frozen

never assume people in the shadows are weak

I am here to watch and learn

I will disassemble you from the inside out

I will tare you at the seams and watch you fall apart

I am in the dark

with all the terrors I've made just for you

never believe silence is weakness

without making a sound I will hunt you down

you won't know until I'm infront of you

watching you bleed 

even when your life is slipping away

you wont know how

I am a raging storm of power 

I am all the monsters watching you in the night

and I am a silent killer 

with capability beyond you dreams 

you will never think bad of me

I am the king here

you are in my world now

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

Great confidence in this write! Expressive and emotive piece of poetry!
Only one suggestion, that is to use capitol letters and punctuations when needed.. :)
(just a suggestion)

Thanks for sharing such an intense write! :) Keep Writing! :)

[light pink]

dear me ! its really violent .. the emotions seem to explode from these strong words ! ( "poeple in the shadows" are always scary beacuse no one can figure out what do they hide behind that veil of scilence )

[Green]

I always enjoy a dark write, and this managed to effectively capture my attention. Well done.