abandoned

this is something I did about a year ago for fun I just found it. I might make it longer or change it later on but for now I actually like it just as it is.

On top of the mountain it will bleed

 Waiting to give its gift

And what you don’t know is it doesn’t breathe

And in its soul is a rift

But you can fix it

With some tape and a little bit of love

And when it’s good as new

It may come down from the mountain above

And give its gift to you

Reviews

[25toLife]

I really like it, we sadly think alike

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

the third line here has a typo or a misspelling, "breath" should be "breathe"/ Other than that, great write