I don't know...what to do

I see you walk blindly away

And i wisper a cold, wasted prayer for you too see me

But you don't and i have nothing to say

 

I see your hair flutter in the sun

You move like Princess and maybe you are

Your body and MY soul,move as one

 

This is love, i knew it as you walked away

For it is a thing I can't see

It pierces my side, feels around for my heart, but it is invisible to me

 

The voice in me asked me to hold you

It spoke to me in the haze. Its voice is a cackle, laughing like fire,

a fire that would burn me through all of my days

 

But you didn't stop to stare

Though i noticed you in a crowd

I picked up my sweater and moved on,why should i care.

 

Reviews

[Emily B]

There is something about your voice that compels the reader. You have a strong voice. Use it well.