A Brief Moment In Time

A Brief Moment In Time

A Poem by Texas Identitycrisis

Ripples like waves out at sea

All while thrusting on top of me

Moments of guilt and frustration

Fade into lusting



Curls dripping down, such beauty

Glistening waves like the ones out at sea

Then your lips on mine

Pressing harder, in time



Your mind

Right where I want it

In that brief moment

Desire, animal motion

Blissful emotion



What about self preservation?

Then closer, so close

Explosion!

It feels like the waves of the sea

Unbridled ocean



Physically guided

To the very inside of me

My lover you leave me

Like a flower all alone in the ocean

Desire surrounds it like the open, vast sea

Mindful of nothing


Lost in a pool of emotion

And physical devotion

Plucked at petals

Floating still now

The waves calming down

It's cracked but not broken

 

2007 IdentityCrisis

© 2008 Texas Identitycrisis


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Love the raw lustful abandon. The stanzas roll like waves, building and building, the energy rising. Wonderfully wrought.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 2, 2008

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Texas Identitycrisis
Texas Identitycrisis

Behind that Pine Curtain, TX



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