A Brief Moment In Time
A Poem by Texas Identitycrisis
Ripples like waves out at sea
All while thrusting on top of me
Moments of guilt and frustration
Fade into lusting
Curls dripping down, such beauty
Glistening waves like the ones out at sea
Then your lips on mine
Pressing harder, in time
Your mind
Right where I want it
In that brief moment
Desire, animal motion
Blissful emotion
What about self preservation?
Then closer, so close
Explosion!
It feels like the waves of the sea
Unbridled ocean
Physically guided
To the very inside of me
My lover you leave me
Like a flower all alone in the ocean
Desire surrounds it like the open, vast sea
Mindful of nothing
Lost in a pool of emotion
And physical devotion
Plucked at petals
Floating still now
The waves calming down
It's cracked but not broken
2007 IdentityCrisis
© 2008 Texas Identitycrisis
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Love the raw lustful abandon. The stanzas roll like waves, building and building, the energy rising. Wonderfully wrought.
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Added on March 2, 2008
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Texas IdentitycrisisBehind that Pine Curtain, TX
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