Pebbles

Short and simple, its about time.

This moment is a pebble,

Toss in in the fountain.

Tomorrow is five more,

I'm still here without you.

I keep on tossing them in,

One pebble at a time.

The fountain is to full,

Your gone and so am I.

Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is superb writing, a total pleasure to read your poetry.

[Ray Hamilton]

A lost love is always hard
Well written
Ray

[bailish]

A quaint little poem. The visualization of time filling up the fountain is great imagery.

[Michelle Tarnowski]

It doesn't take a lot of words to convey a message. You've done that here. Good job.

[Dani California]

Wow... this is interesting!

I love how you've related pebbles
to the passage of time...

and in so few lines.

Well done!!

[lots fo love ♥]

i liked it. short sweet simple. also liked the meaning behind it. great job.