ramble

I'm going to write and see what I can come up with off the top of my head for the next few minutes

I know who you are, and I'm in love with you. I feel like I've known you for so long. So please, show me a sign of where I could find you. Lead me into the right direction, do not let me fail. Come now as we lay our heads on the grass in a place where it always rains. Lay here with me and tell me all of your hopes and dreams and what you expect of  me. Tell me it will be okay, when we both know it can only be a lie. Say that you love me and forever you'll be mine, but this time don't lie.

Reviews

[Christopher J. Dawson]

This is pretty good for being quick on your head-foot! haha honestly, a cool piece... short, beautiful and eloquent.

[O. Ragnarok]

Nice feeling on this one. Good emotion. This came out of the top of your head? Well, the best stuff usually does. I really liked this one. Especially the last line: "Say that you love me and forever you'll be mine, but this time don't lie." I've been there before.