PAST

PAST

A Poem by phoenix
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every person at some point wish they could change an event that happen in the past or correct a mistake that ruined their lives

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 If there was a device that allowed us to travel miles into the past
What parts of our lives would we change
Could we rewrite our destiny
Could we change the flaws of our past
Would there be a limit as how far in the past we can go
Would we have the advantage of knowing the next events in our lives
Would our choices be more wiser
Would we live by our own will and not by the will of others
If people say we can't live in the past,then why do our minds travel to the past

© 2016 phoenix


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I like the idea of being able to travel back to the past and change things. If only it was possible...yet I feel I'd make the same mistakes all over again no many how many times I traveled back. The last line is very true, as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thought provoking indeed and it raises many questions ... I like the idea of being surprised by what can be learnt from each moment in the present X

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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