Love Lightly Drifts

His words are like crescent moons
that fill and sparkle in my sky,
while I hang my star on each one.

His smile, a beacon, across the dead lands,
brings me home in breathless abandon
so I might sleep in total safety.

His heart keeps in time to a music
known only to the two of us
as we sway in the summer breeze.

His truth, his light, his gentleness exists
in this moment and beyond all horizons,
for I shall always find him, this fair love of mine.

Reviews

[Cassie]

I love feasting my eyes on such kind of words and feeding my mind with such great poetry.

[Clockwork]

I agree with Jacob. You really know you have something special when your love has a soundtrack written for two. Maybe a few notes have crept into this piece?

The cosmic imagery in this poem was also a nice touch. This is the kind of love that doesn't need to throw a lasso around the moon and pull it down, because the people in love are already among the stars.

[Stonz P.]

I read it first to last and then, last to first. I liked the latter more...
I confess I do not get to learn from many writers on here but you are one of the few genius exceptions..

There is such great imagery in here and the piece progressed very strongly for me, helping me relate to the emotion.
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece, Ma'am :)

[willweb]

This was absolutely beautiful. Such an enchanting feel to this as your words had me gazing on a clear night sky in amazment. I really loved this poem Icelandicblue. Once more, absolutely beautiful.

[icelandicblue]

Thank you so much will. I am pleased that you found beauty in the poem.

[s y e]

Oh now this is my zone at the moment, totally love this one Anne. The passion in your words... can't beat it.

[icelandicblue]

Happy you're there. Enjoy it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What i like is this can be seen in a couple ways… describing your soulmate or talking bout your spiritual connection to the Lord. Either way very nice.

[icelandicblue]

Thank you Dale I appreciate it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why you are welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is love...especially when there is the music that only two can hear...their passion is a favorite song.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much for those words jacob.

[Lyn Anderson]

Well done, romantic, and lovely images.

[icelandicblue]

Thank you so very much.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Beautiful. This poem has a nice, soft, loving voice. Great writing, Ice!

[icelandicblue]

I appreciate that, thank you.

[Matching Socks]

You had me right out of the gate, wow. Strong opening.
Really beautiful poem, so romantic and some lovely magical images.

[icelandicblue]

Thank you so much Ana. I'm trying to go light, I'm usually so very dark. Thanks again.

[Matching Socks]

You do both sides well. :)