Heroin Senryu

Illicit affair
with a serial killer
sharp bladed kisses

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I never understood this type of poetry so can't make a comment. Sorry.

[icelandicblue]

No problem. ; )

[Kasey Miriam]

I never pass up a chance to read another's haiku and senryu because they are my favorite poems. Needless to say wonderful job. This was deep and dark.

[icelandicblue]

Thank you Kasey. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

[Frieda P]

What can I say, aptly pen'd in so few powerful words and so true, kiss of death for sure.

[icelandicblue]

I know, she has sucked the life out of all of us.

[Frieda P]

As she continues to breathe fire with a vengeance....

[Bluefire]

What have I stumbled on to?
This was a bit fearful, like dancing with death.
I like it.
It's dangerous and clever.
Well done. ^^

[icelandicblue]

Thank you so much Bluefire.

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is what I would call having a death wish,

"sharp blade kisses' very creative line.

[icelandicblue]

It surely is. Thanks.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.

[Raymond Federle]

Excellent!!!! ......... :)

[icelandicblue]

Thanks a lot.

[MsJewel]

Very powerful.

:) Julie

[icelandicblue]

Thank you Julie.

[MsJewel]

You have inspired me to write about an old friend with this addiction. I will be certain to credit you when I post my poem. :) Julie

[icelandicblue]

I wish you didn't have any experience at all in this dark realm. I will be sure to visit it and feel your pain along with you.

[Rachelle]

Heavy truths said in so few words…...

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Rachelle.

[Aethereal]

I enjoyed how you personified this drug. It inspired me to write another Senryu as a form of word play on yours: You may keep it as your own as a gift:

Heroine Senryu

She died in the flames
saving children from charred frames.
She gave what Death claims.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Aethereal for the poem and the comment.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! Once an "e" is added to the end of the word heroin it becomes entirely another. My mind is good at doing word associations.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Hits like a hammer. Brutally strong.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks for commenting my friend.