Weather Beaten
A Poem by
icelandicblue
Life clouds my vision all I see is cold drizzle washing me away.
© 2014 icelandicblue
Reviews
Oh Anne, I do hate winter sometimes. That time of year where it's old, dark and dull and can reflect your mood in some way or another. A lovely senryu.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks my little noodle.
A simplistic, yet deeply philosophical haiku. Very thought provoking...
Posted 10 Years Ago
A simplistic, yet deeply philosophical haiku. Very thought provoking...
10 Years Ago
Simple and deep- I like that summation. Thank you.
A very atmospheric and mood-filled senyru. When it rains; it pours.
Posted 10 Years Ago
A very atmospheric and mood-filled senyru. When it rains; it pours.
10 Years Ago
Yes it does. Thanks Pryde.
Wow this is one buzz kill of a Senryu.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Wow this is one buzz kill of a Senryu.
10 Years Ago
That's me!!! ;)
Oh, dear....I hope you are not describing how you feel now and for your future, but rather just the Winter's worst! Personally, I always feel that way every Winter. I'm a Spring person, and the Winter is just a season to persevere with hope of the Spring to come. This poem is short, sweet, and mind provoking.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Oh, dear....I hope you are not describing how you feel now and for your future, but rather just the Winter's worst! Personally, I always feel that way every Winter. I'm a Spring person, and the Winter is just a season to persevere with hope of the Spring to come. This poem is short, sweet, and mind provoking.
10 Years Ago
Thanks Daffy for your review!
I hate this weather. It's so... depressing? Makes you feel sad and lonely. Loved this Senryu.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I hate this weather. It's so... depressing? Makes you feel sad and lonely. Loved this Senryu.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Kimmie, the weather is not always kind.
10 Years Ago
Absolutely not.
Spring is right atround the corner my friend, though this winter seems a damn long block. Very nice Anne.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Spring is right atround the corner my friend, though this winter seems a damn long block. Very nice Anne.
10 Years Ago
Hopefully an early one my friend. Thank you so much.
I felt this in my bones, like the damp weather. Dark Senryu, works perfectly Anne.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I felt this in my bones, like the damp weather. Dark Senryu, works perfectly Anne.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Frieda, the days are getting longer maybe it won't be so dark.
I feel this way sometimes.well penned blue:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
I feel this way sometimes.well penned blue:)
10 Years Ago
I think few of us escape never feeling like this.
10 Years Ago
..........................:)
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Added on January 6, 2014
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