Weather Beaten

Weather Beaten

A Poem by icelandicblue

Life clouds my vision
all I see is cold drizzle
washing me
away.

© 2014 icelandicblue


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Oh Anne, I do hate winter sometimes. That time of year where it's old, dark and dull and can reflect your mood in some way or another. A lovely senryu.

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Thanks my little noodle.
A simplistic, yet deeply philosophical haiku. Very thought provoking...

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Simple and deep- I like that summation. Thank you.
A very atmospheric and mood-filled senyru. When it rains; it pours.

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Yes it does. Thanks Pryde.
Wow this is one buzz kill of a Senryu.

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

That's me!!! ;)
Oh, dear....I hope you are not describing how you feel now and for your future, but rather just the Winter's worst! Personally, I always feel that way every Winter. I'm a Spring person, and the Winter is just a season to persevere with hope of the Spring to come. This poem is short, sweet, and mind provoking.

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Thanks Daffy for your review!
I hate this weather. It's so... depressing? Makes you feel sad and lonely. Loved this Senryu.

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmie, the weather is not always kind.
Kimmie

10 Years Ago

Absolutely not.
Spring is right atround the corner my friend, though this winter seems a damn long block. Very nice Anne.

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Hopefully an early one my friend. Thank you so much.
I felt this in my bones, like the damp weather. Dark Senryu, works perfectly Anne.

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda, the days are getting longer maybe it won't be so dark.
I feel this way sometimes.well penned blue:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


icelandicblue

10 Years Ago

I think few of us escape never feeling like this.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

..........................:)

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Added on January 6, 2014
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