Sugar Pop

Just in fun!

You are my sugar daddy
I love to lick you
head to
toe.

Just keep
those diamonds coming
and let that money
flow

I’m your arm candy
baby, the glitter in your
step, I’m your bedtime
morsel, the girl you
can’t forget

I make you feel so young
I’m your siren from the sea,
But there’s a price for
pleasure, it doesn’t come
for free

Take me when you want me,
by now I know the drill.
Just don’t look too closely,
got my hand deep in the till.

Reviews

[Jack...]

Now I really need a snickers bar...funny one here Anne and so very fun to hear your smile peeking through.

[icelandicblue]

I have my moments Jack. Thanks

[Aethereal]

I really enjoyed this funny poem: The first two verses may be written in reverse. Your may keep this gift quatrain as your own since I use so many of your words in it: I could add more rhyming quatrains but this is your domain and not mine: It’s in /0/0/0 six syllable and /0/0/ five syllable meter:

Sugar

Be my sugar daddy.
Let your money flow.
As your candy baby,
lick me head to toe.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Athereal,

I think yours always has more perfection where rhyme and meter are concerned. You are the concert pianist and I play by ear. I appreciate the effort but would prefer to keep my voice even if it's more like Chopsticks. Thanks again.

[Aethereal]

Your voice works best within your domain. This is why I didn't add three more quatrains. You have a large following of readers who enjoy your voice just as it is. My voice is an apple, and yours is an orange. Most people enjoy one as much as the other.

[icelandicblue]

That's very sweet Aethereal. Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Lol Anne, good to see this lighter side of you again. Hey, if they're both getting their candy's worth, no foul I guess....there's a price to pay for everything in life, you pen'd it pretty fookin funny!

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Frieda. Sometimes funny is enough, thanks for that.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Haha...sugar daddy :) This was a clever poem about hidden agendas. I have often looked at certain relationships that are obviously of this nature, and my initial assessment is usually one of eye rolling, but when you really think about it, so long as both people are getting what they want, what is the harm? Not the type of relationship for me, but to each his own. Nicely written.

[icelandicblue]

I agree, there are all types of pas de deux out there and who am I to judge? One thing life has taught me is not to spit in the wind. Thanks Sarah.

[Baby Ricochet]

Everyone has an agenda and working the money maker is an oldie but a goody. Chick lands a rich man l say more power to her. Great poem blue. Loved it.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much BR. Glad you liked it.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, I adore the picture!

I have known a few gals like this - keep the money coming and they'll keep on giving.....lol
A cute write but also sadly so true of many who opt for a payout for the "giving out"!

[icelandicblue]

Yes, it's most definitely a double edged sword. Thanks Sheila.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like a limmerick...quite a ride...he better watch out.

she will sour his sweetness and curdle his milk.

those sugar pops will never taste the same.

[icelandicblue]

Ha, can't seem to write anything serious or highly descriptive so limerick like is an apt description. Thanks Jacob.