Sugar Pop

Just in fun!

You are my sugar daddy
I love to lick you
head to
toe.

Just keep
those diamonds coming
and let that money
flow

I’m your arm candy
baby, the glitter in your
step, I’m your bedtime
morsel, the girl you
can’t forget

I make you feel so young
I’m your siren from the sea,
But there’s a price for
pleasure, it doesn’t come
for free

Take me when you want me,
by now I know the drill.
Just don’t look too closely,
got my hand deep in the till.

Reviews

[Angi]

Sugar daddy knows it, I bet. The price he pays is worth every penny when she pours her sugar on him! Well done, Blue! I love to read poetry that feels new to me. Angi~

[icelandicblue]

LOL love your sugar comment. Thanks Angi.

[Angi]

You are very welcome, Blue. Def Leppard was playing when I read this! Ha!

[Einstein Noodle]

Va-va-voom! rollicking good time! the pic fits perfectly. Sugar daddy knows but doesn't listen does he!?
E.

[icelandicblue]

LOL- no he doesn't...thanks for your fun response.

[icelandicblue]

I have the song stuck in my mind now!

[Lydia Shutter]

Delicious tongue in cheek humor here. Arm candy is not for free, absolutely not. Often the price paid is far too steep! Loved the images you evoked and the rhyming in this one. Great rhythm. Lydi**

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Lydi glad it made you smile.

[Great Aunt Astri]

I had a good giggle at this one. The rhythm does remind me of an Eartha Kit song

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you giggled.

[Pryde Foltz]

Clever and just a little biting. I liked. Great one, blue.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

[Joyce S. Greene]

This is really delightful, Anne. That woman may be getting what she wants materially, but is she getting what really counts? Guess those are the ponderings of an older woman, but I've always wondered how those young women feel when they bed those really old men. In any case, your poem is first rate, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

[icelandicblue]

I know what you mean. I've thought the same thing myself. Thanks so much Joyce.

[Mark]

LOL I can see the allure to having a young beautiful woman in my life even if it were for a price. Nice work :)

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Mark! I appreciate you reading and commenting.

[Rita L. Sev]

LOL! Witty tale, Blue - calls to mind Hugh Hefner, and the song "Santa Baby, slip a sable under the tree..." :)

[icelandicblue]

Ertha Kitt, love that song. Thanks so much Rita.

[shallimarRose]

LOL Rite on!!! I know a few that have got burned by the younger women online pretending to care and some need to feel needed so badly. This was a fun read.. Rose

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much. I am happy you enjoyed this.

[Justaguy]

LOL. Awesome write! Now every time I hear about one of them, I will think of this poem!

[icelandicblue]

He he, thanks!