White Noise Dark

His hand grasps

Making her blush
and flush; such a
rush
into his fire of
defrocked desire

Stumble up stairs
to his lair; so
aware
of each nerve,
no reserve.

Doors flung wide
slip inside; they
collide
fervent sparks
in white noise dark.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Been there done that. Great poem Blue

[icelandicblue]

Ha Ha...thanks BR.

[Lydia Shutter]

Reminds me of an old black and white movie....fade to black! :) So much desire and urgency in your lines and yet the elegance of it is wonderful. You left a lot to the imagination. I liked it. lydi**

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much lydi!

[TL Boehm]

fervent sparks in white noise dark. love the physicality of this piece. Just letting the moment between people happen.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks a lot TL. It's always a pleasure to hear from you.

[Einstein Noodle]

I love the title and its repetition in at the end. you have created a framework for the imagination to fill.
"into his fire of
defrocked desire"
(rolls in the vampire)
:))
surely you will save this for your book!
E.

[icelandicblue]

How kind of you! Thanks again for your comment.

[Dr. Wood ?]

sounds as if it all came out in one go ICE......It flows superbly and it sorta made me blush...That's a good thing, right?

[icelandicblue]

Ha! Yes it is, it most certainly is.

[Dye]

Really enjoyed this. Descriptive... But not really. Sensual...but classy. Very nice.

[icelandicblue]

Hi Dye,

Appreciate your kind words.

[Angi]

Oh Blue, this one is so good! Very few words were used and I totally got the feel of this. Sensual wanting and needing poured from every word. Just excellent! Angi~

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much Angi!

[Justaguy]

I sometimes marvel at how in just a few words on a page, someone can tell a complete story. You have done that. So sensual!!

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much just a guy!

[Justaguy]

You are very welcome Ms Blue

[Jack...]

Wow my friend...I really loved this one. I love the feel, the format and how you have danced around yet painted so vibrantly the story that is glowing in this piece. Love the title too. Very cool, this is a step out for you, allowing us a peek in. Very cool my friend.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Jack,

Word play and then one thing led to another...you know how that goes LOL. Thanks a billion as always!