White Noise Dark

His hand grasps

Making her blush
and flush; such a
rush
into his fire of
defrocked desire

Stumble up stairs
to his lair; so
aware
of each nerve,
no reserve.

Doors flung wide
slip inside; they
collide
fervent sparks
in white noise dark.

Reviews

[Tom]

A perky and sparky one, this was excellent !

[icelandicblue]

Thank you very much Tom.

[Mockingbird]

very steamy imagery. i like how 'defrocked' connotes the forbidden or taboo. conveys the urgency of their desire and impending gratification. excellent poem.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much Mockingbird.

[wordwarrior]

Wow, a very sultry piece of writing here. Great visuals, with succinct word choices. Nice one!

[icelandicblue]

Thank you very much for your kind review wordwarrior.

[Debbie_Philly]

Pretty hot and the flow was great..... I liked this allot :)

[icelandicblue]

Hey,

Thanks so much Debbie.

[Debbie_Philly]

Your very welcomed !! :)

[shallimarRose]

Love the White Noise Dark title.. very nice poem..good rhyme.. Rose

[icelandicblue]

Thanks so much Rose.

[s y e]

Sorry I haven't reviewed you lately, was in hospital yesterday.

This is very different from your other writes that I've read. Quite sexy and sensual. I loved the way you wrote it, it was a nice change from other writes that we've all been reading lately, although they're great, too. You know I love your writes. :) Nicely done, as always!

[icelandicblue]

Hope you are ok Noodle. Thanks, this is word play that ended up at something else. Can't write doom and gloom 24/7 eh? If you read sequined dreams you may be surprised. Good to see you!

[s y e]

I thought I would be behind but I've read them all up to this one. :D

[icelandicblue]

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[Rosaria_V]

this was awesome, even though it was sort it gave a real impact :) Always great to read your work!

[icelandicblue]

Thank you so much!

[Mark]

Very nice use of language to create a sense of urgency, desire demanding fulfillment. Love it.

[icelandicblue]

Thank you so much Mark!

[Traci]

This was quite different from your other writes, very nice indeed. So sensual in so few lines, well done, my friend.

[icelandicblue]

Thanks Traci,
I appreciate your comment.