Safe Harbor (Haiku)

Salt spray fills the air
we cut through the wild whitecaps
toward the white boned sand.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I like the movement that you capture in this one. The sound of your words, combines with the idea of cutting through the whitecaps, creates the thought of running back to the shore without having to use that word. I like tour alliteration with the "wild whitecaps" in the second line of this one. Great Haiku to capture a moment of summer fun.

[icelandicblue]

Hi Clockwork,

Thank you so much for your kind comment.

[Clockwork]

You're welcome :-)

[Angi]

Sounds like they are headed for the nitty gritty, Blue. Safe harbor, eh? Angi~

[icelandicblue]

One can only hope Angi- most things are only revealed in retrospect. Thanks for the read.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

White boned sand ... this has the feel of a deserted place. Who's bones are they and how did they get here? How did they die? Perhaps this harbor is not so safe. [Said the worry wart]

[icelandicblue]

LOL- you have made a good point. Perhaps the title is misleading. Don't worry, we don't have to stop.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice early morning feel to this one.

[icelandicblue]

Now if I could only figure how to dock the boat. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Frieda P]

Awh land at last, your safe harbor gave me a cozy feeling