Overflowing

Overflowing

A Poem by icelandicblue















The baggage I carry

wasn't packed by me.

© 2013 icelandicblue


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Love..love...love this. Fantastic statement in so few words!! And the truth of it screams out to be heard!! ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
Why didn't I think of that?! Speaks volumes....suitcases full! Overflowing to the max. Yes, I can relate, simple and to the point, like that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

I think we all lug around suitcases we didn't pack. Thanks so much Frieda.
There's something beautiful in the simplicity of this

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
Unless that photograph is your work, I really don't think this has much merit at all. I mean, really, two lines? That's all you could write on the topic? I do realize that brevity is the soul of wit, but there is nothing particularly intelligent or original here. You can do much better.

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I am a woman of few words which most definitely works for me here. I have lon.. read more
Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

You might find, Ice, that there are people who gain a feeling of expertise, by going around belittli.. read more
icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

; )
ain't that the truth...and whoever did it, didn't use the space too wisely...

could have put more in, left too much room...and with that room, i can put some good memories in there...and do some rearranging...get myself back on track...and travel to a new me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

That's good advice-like cleaning out a closet. I suppose you could refold a few things and discard t.. read more

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