Unless that photograph is your work, I really don't think this has much merit at all. I mean, really, two lines? That's all you could write on the topic? I do realize that brevity is the soul of wit, but there is nothing particularly intelligent or original here. You can do much better.
Thanks for the review. I am a woman of few words which most definitely works for me here. I have lon.. read moreThanks for the review. I am a woman of few words which most definitely works for me here. I have longer pieces if you are so inclined.
11 Years Ago
You might find, Ice, that there are people who gain a feeling of expertise, by going around belittli.. read moreYou might find, Ice, that there are people who gain a feeling of expertise, by going around belittling the work of others. I won't mention any NAMES, but I have had experience with people like that.
ain't that the truth...and whoever did it, didn't use the space too wisely...
could have put more in, left too much room...and with that room, i can put some good memories in there...and do some rearranging...get myself back on track...and travel to a new me.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
That's good advice-like cleaning out a closet. I suppose you could refold a few things and discard t.. read moreThat's good advice-like cleaning out a closet. I suppose you could refold a few things and discard the rest. I'd much prefer a bag filled with happy memories. Thanks so much jacob for your ever insightful review.
I do not accept any new friend requests unless we have read and commented on each others poetry. No exceptions. I have enough homework as it is. I expect reciprocity in our exchanges. Read my work and.. more..