With Love

With Love

A Poem by icelandicblue

Time has not erased
the beauty that was you,
the smell of your perfume
and how you always knew

what was on my mind
and who i really was
despite mistakes I made
you loved me just because.

You left us much too soon
as I began a family of my own,
and not a day goes by
that I smile but also mourn

those moments that we shared
the love that I came from,
I miss you from my depths,
I'll always love you mom.






© 2013 icelandicblue


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God this one hit home. It's something I still graple with every day, and its been 23 years since I lost my mom. As my husband and I get ready to start our own family I can't imagine how I'll do it without her...and yet I've come this far. I feel your pain, and I honor you. Thank you so much for this beautiful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kristen. I am so sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing your feelings. I apprecia.. read more



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I lost my mom last month. The emotions in your poem are spot on. What a lovely tribute.

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sharon and I am sorry for your loss. It's so very hard.
Wow, this one is really touching and so relatable to many people! It was so emotional and had me tearing up, you really had the emotion spot on. This one girl in my school lost her mother, last year and was deeply upset about it when it came to exams. She said she didnt want to fail her, I said she wont fail her, no matter how bad or good you do she'll be proud because she knows you'll try your best and you'll always improve. Shes your mother and loves you tons. :) She ended up hugging me and crying. Made me cry, haha.

Amazing, Blue!

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

My mom died 18 years ago...it's hard to believe I've lived so long without her. You are blazing a tr.. read more
s y e

11 Years Ago

I've been meaning to go back and read your work, had it bookmarked for a while. I cannot imagine liv.. read more
THis was really sweet. Wonderful

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I wrote this for my mom who has passed and today would have been her birthday so I feel grat.. read more
You have reached a level of depth that not too many people (myself included) are ready to go to just yet. You really lead the way.

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

I am humbled Stefon. I just lost my dad and I haven't been on much but I promise I will be reading y.. read more
Stefon Napier

11 Years Ago

Don't worry about it. Poems are meant to last. They'll be there whenever you find the time. Thanks t.. read more
A very nicely penned poem, except the second stanza that sounds out of meaning. Well structured, nice flow. The meaning comes across and feels. Nice read :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really liked it :)
So emotional too ..
Thanks for sharing it with me :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your review.
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

You are always welcome dear :)
Take care!!
I know I'm blessed to still have my mother in my life. Many of my close friends have lost theirs. Your love and grief rolls from every line. This is such a touching tribute to your mother. It brought tears to my eyes!

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you Red. I am moved by your response.
I can see that it’s going to be quite an adventure analyzing your poetic language. This poem inspired me to write your first verse in a new way that you may keep as a gift: I would follow through using the same form in all the other verses if it was my poem:

Time shall not erase
memories of you,
that look on your face
telling me you knew.

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

That is lovely. Thank you.
Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Here I used overlapping rhyme with five accent beats in each line. All the accents fall where they s.. read more
This is just amazing the way emotions flow through this soft and simple poem. Really very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


icelandicblue

11 Years Ago

Aw thanks so very much. ; )

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