Memorable are the long languid days
where humidity hangs
like a heavy surcoat
and the smallest of breezes
offers a promise of relief
like an errant lover.
When the sun slinks slowly
beyond the grateful horizon
the fairies gather along dark roads
and manicured lawns.
And
then they light up the earth
as they dance against
the velvet sky, these
tiny stars,
scintillating sparks,
beneath the leafy canopy
of firefly summer.
A graceful dance of children on the city streets as they yell and play games of tag and kickball while their parents sit and watch in reminder of their early years in joy of what they brought to this earth. Elegantly reminded of soft smells of spring flowers touch the nose and the dusk slowy setting in with the bright lights of fairies dancing as children chase with their nets hoping, praying to catch one to make a wish.
Blue, quiet moments just like this are just what I wanted. I could picture nights sitting on the deck drinking well-chilled wine with my husband. Watching the stars flicker along with the fireflies made for some magical moments. Lovely. Thank you for submitting! Angi~
Simply, perfectly sublime. We don`t have fireflies in UK, but I remember a magical night on the Isle of Jersey with my future wife, when the only light along a lane was from stars and glow-worms in the hedgerows. Thank you, Blue. P.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
It is always a magical experience that everyone should see at least once. I'm happy you have that me.. read moreIt is always a magical experience that everyone should see at least once. I'm happy you have that memory Pete. Thanks so very much for your lovely comment.
I really have to wonder...why in the hell are you...I don't know how to say this tactfully...why in the hell are you HERE and not reading aloud from your many many many published books of poetry somewhere??? You should have many many many published books of poetry! I know I'm not the only one who would buy them!!! GAH!!!
Good? No. Phenomenal.
Just saying.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
LOL Thanks kimmer. I don't know. I don't think I see what you are seeing here. You did, however, mak.. read moreLOL Thanks kimmer. I don't know. I don't think I see what you are seeing here. You did, however, make my day! Love your photo btw.
11 Years Ago
Ha ;-) Me and The Lish at the beach...thanks. And you know it's always my pleasure. I realize it's.. read moreHa ;-) Me and The Lish at the beach...thanks. And you know it's always my pleasure. I realize it's hard to take a step back and see your own brilliance, but you should try it sometime ;-) Then again I'm a card carrying narcissist so it's easy for me xD xD xD Hope your weekend is going great. xoxo
Ahhh, this takes me back. In my mind, I am a little girl again, squealing at the fireworks after the family Fourth of July picnic...laughing gaily as me and my cousins chase fireflies.
Thank you so much for sharing this fabulous poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I am happy that the poem reminded you of such a beautiful memory.
A beautiful poem. I use to visit my dad in the mountains of Virginia. In the night. Fireflies lite up the sky. They were a beautiful sight to see. I enjoyed your description and photo. Good to enjoy the beauty of the night with the fireflies. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
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Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Hello!
Thank you so much for giving me one of your beautiful reviews. I am happy that you coul.. read moreHello!
Thank you so much for giving me one of your beautiful reviews. I am happy that you could connect to a special memory through the poem. There is something about fireflies that fill the air with magic. Again, thanks again.
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