Starving In Northern California

Senryu

If it ain't grass fed
organic or gluten free
you ain't eating it

Reviews

[s y e]

Haha, I loved this! A great senryu! You done a great job with this, short and effective!

Perfection

[icelandicblue]

No one would feed me!

[Zahra]

Very nicely crafted senryu, well put, blue!

[Coyote Poetry]

There are good places to eat in California. They are hiding from the crazy folks who are health conscious and too healthy. Nice use of words to make your point. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[icelandicblue]

Thank you once again for taking the time to comment.

[Pete Langley]

I`ve got friends like this - but worse! I love going to stay....I lose pounds...but the craik (oh, sorry - Irish?) is the best, there`s not much time to eat. (was the misspell in the title deliberate? P.)

[icelandicblue]

No that's a typo- thanks for seeing it.

[Ink]

HAHA!!

I'm SoCal born, relocated to NorCal for my job.. Gotta say this got quite a laugh out of me

[icelandicblue]

Thank you- nice to meet you.

[Distant horizons]

As opposed to here in Scotland. if it moves, deep fry it :-)

[icelandicblue]

LOL- Lorry- thanks for the comment.

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[icelandicblue]

Mind you I love things deep fried- I just don't eat a lot of it.

[Distant horizons]

Either do we, just on days that end in Y :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I wouldn't want to eat like that... even going out in the sun is dangerous but I still enjoy the outdoors.

[icelandicblue]

Everything is dangerous in degrees-I agree with you. Thanks for commenting.

[Muse]

well, we shouldn't eat it. Is that what you mean? Unfortunatley if we followed those rules...we'd all be very very hungry. I think I need to buy a cow. lol

[icelandicblue]

Basically- I didn't have enough to eat! Buy that cow and treat her well.
Thanks so much for the comment.

[Muse]

in all seriousness..really?

[icelandicblue]

Yes!

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! I love it (as I eat a piece of cold leftover fried chicken from Church's) When I lived in Seattle it was pretty much the same thing...organic this, grass fed that...nice write, blue. Great Senryu.

[icelandicblue]

You go girl-eat while the eating is good. Frankly moderation works best. There is a certain affectation when taken to a fever pitch. Thanks for the comment. I needed to get this one out of my system.

[KAOlmsted]

Absolutely...I always wanted to open a bar called Moderation, that way whenever anyone was told to drink in moderation they'd come to my place xD I'd make a bloody fortune ;-)

Always my pleasure.

[Frieda P]

That's pretty funny the kimmer, I guess you'd not drink there yourself so? lol

[KAOlmsted]

I don't do too much in moderation, true, true ;-) xoxo Frieda...you better come back, girl!