Newton's Law

One of my first attempts

A body in motion

stays in motion

a body at rest

isn't a body at all.

rather a husk

       a shell

                                 a box

                   conveyor belt

             truck

  a delivery

failed

across the top stamped:

                        RETURN TO SENDER.

  A gut feeling

a raw

      thought

     ground meat idea

  that

   is the

  catalyst

    for

      the solution.

 What's

 the problem in 

        the first place?

 ONWARD

while

      you

  have

       the 

   option.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words and I liked the positive ending. Always go forward. Leave the mistakes behind find new and better goals. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote