Heat

Heat

A Poem by no.cristeaux
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It was hot outside

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THE SUN is oppressive by nature.
As a serpent, it constricts.
The blood beneath the skin
boils
even from afar. 
In the night, it is elusive, hidden.
In the day, it strikes hard and quick 
like a bird of prey hawking a field mouse
a lion tearing apart its prey
not in malice 
but by nature. 

Heat scalds the skin, singes the bones,
sets upon even the soul itself. 
It scrambles the brain
and falters the step;
primordial
life-giving 
life-eroding 
a superior, all-consuming
force of nature.

© 2015 no.cristeaux


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I liked how you define heat. I agree with your words and thoughts. Man tried to control all things. The sun is a powerful force. That can't not be controlled. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


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no.cristeaux

9 Years Ago

Glad I was able to get nature's primal energy across, and the futility of man by comparison. Solid l.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You did and please send read requests. I would be honored to read your work.
no.cristeaux

9 Years Ago

I would be honored to have you read my work; send me requests as well. Thank you so much.
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I liked how you define heat. I agree with your words and thoughts. Man tried to control all things. The sun is a powerful force. That can't not be controlled. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

no.cristeaux

9 Years Ago

Glad I was able to get nature's primal energy across, and the futility of man by comparison. Solid l.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You did and please send read requests. I would be honored to read your work.
no.cristeaux

9 Years Ago

I would be honored to have you read my work; send me requests as well. Thank you so much.
read more

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