The car

The car

A Poem by icaros13
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Sitting with my coffee
Smoking up the Sun
Deep in contemplation
About life and love
The nature of God
The God of Nature
The nature of man
Michelangelo and
Early Christianity

I looked up and
Saw a car
 That looked like
Yours

My heart leaped,and
On the way down
I realized it wasn't you

© 2015 icaros13


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I totally know that feeling! And the bout of sadness that immediately follows it..
Great poem I loved it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Something similar happened to me like this recently as well, funny how the stomach shrivels in disappointment. Loved this, as I can relate to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautiful imagery expressing expectation and despair.

Posted 9 Years Ago


fun and interesting view of your day of contemplation of life and missed love.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on November 18, 2015
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icaros13
icaros13

Kansas, OK



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For we have thought the larger thoughts And gone the shorter way. And we have danced to devil's tunes, Shivering home to pray; To serve one master in the night, Another in the day. ..I do love.. more..

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