Conflicted

The Wind spoke of love
When we talked at dawn
The rising Sun agreed
Though fear and denial
Raged through my mind
In my heart
Hope planted a seed

Reviews

[Kt k]

Wow that poem has left me wordless its so short yet so sweet and the depth behind it is endless this is a poem of a true poet the line hope planted a seed is by far my favorite though beautifully written the words flow like honey

[Corset]

That's so romantic Icarios13 , very brave and very sweet, hearts will be breaking all over the world tonight :) very touching and understandable this kind of fear :) You described it so perfectly.

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:: a very thought-provoking piece of writing, monsieur m. :: the first thought i had in my mind when i reached that incredible last line was that... sometimes people just don't believe in the reality that "the rising Sun" agrees with... and that's why we need to follow our hearts... because a heart never lies... and then when we meet people who also follow their hearts... the beauty of the universe manifests in every breath... we feel loved and we feel light...