Saturation

Saturation

A Poem by icaros13
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Today my eyes
perceive the World
in lovely shades
of indica

I'm listening to Wind,
conversing with Earth,
drinking Fire,
and watching Water

Grief, whispers Wind
Hope, says the Earth
Help, burns the Fire
Unity, advises Water
from its reflection

© 2013 icaros13


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Perfection. You have always been so exceptionally in tune with the elements that surround you, it reminds me of a quote. "The quieter you become, the more you can hear." It seems simple at first, but after deliberating for a while you begin to realize that they're talking about meditation, about being significantly aware of your surroundings, of the cries of the earth, the plights of people around you. Everyone and everything needs to be heard, and can be, if you are of the ability to LISTEN.

I read this several times through, and am truly awed and awakened by your words. I feel them tenderly and deeply, and it makes me miss you so much. I hope the summer brings you joys and love- you deserve the best of everything life has to offer you.... lovely and moving write, Michael. I adore it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Perfection. You have always been so exceptionally in tune with the elements that surround you, it reminds me of a quote. "The quieter you become, the more you can hear." It seems simple at first, but after deliberating for a while you begin to realize that they're talking about meditation, about being significantly aware of your surroundings, of the cries of the earth, the plights of people around you. Everyone and everything needs to be heard, and can be, if you are of the ability to LISTEN.

I read this several times through, and am truly awed and awakened by your words. I feel them tenderly and deeply, and it makes me miss you so much. I hope the summer brings you joys and love- you deserve the best of everything life has to offer you.... lovely and moving write, Michael. I adore it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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That's where that smell is coming from! I thought the dirt road taught you to never wind talk alone, lol...ahh I amuse myself :) I'm so glad you are writing, wish I had a little of that too :P I've been a good girl far too long. Did you know "God" made THC recepters in us specifically for this plant, why then do you suppose "the powers that be" do not want us to have it? Make it a "dirty dirty thing", we have'em and it grows for a reason, so ..carry on lovely shades and don't forget to puff puff give that ancient wind.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I am one with my fellow reviewers; profound and wise in its simplicity.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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:: absolutely beautiful work... so profound... it is, i believe, when we feel one with the universe... that such profundity touches our core and we are able to exude it...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely Says I ...I can see the Native American influence/heritage and always have been attracted to the culture .. Simple yet so rich...Great Write !

Posted 11 Years Ago


if ever i happened upon truly the perfect words for a day, this must be them

Posted 11 Years Ago



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For we have thought the larger thoughts And gone the shorter way. And we have danced to devil's tunes, Shivering home to pray; To serve one master in the night, Another in the day. ..I do love.. more..

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