Dances With Spiders

A Poem by icaros13

Formerly "Hair and Spiders"

Looking for parking
The only space was where
The spider
Admired
Your hair
That day

© 2012 icaros13

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Kristallo

Looking for parking on campus is like looking for a needle in a haystack, it took me fifteen minutes of driving around to find somewhere to park so I could run in for a starbucks this morning, and what do I find when I come back out? A ticket for being in visitors parking!

Loved the poem, too. It's cute. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kristallo

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Renée

( : Sweet !

Posted 12 Years Ago

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. the sights and sounds that trigger memories are as poetic as they are baffling ... and ... of course ... moving ... this piece is all that and more ... a very intriguing and unforgettable micro epic ... i can't help but want to know more about the spider story :P ...

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

I'm working on it, my friend. Started today.

Baby Ricochet

Cryptic. Heavy man.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

Nice vision create by the excellent poem. Spiders and finding a parking spot always add to a tale. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 15, 2012
Last Updated on August 15, 2012
Tags: poetry, poem

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icaros13

Kansas, OK

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For we have thought the larger thoughts And gone the shorter way. And we have danced to devil's tunes, Shivering home to pray; To serve one master in the night, Another in the day. ..I do love.. more..