(insignificant)

(insignificant)

A Poem by icaros13
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I should have known.

The hand can’t pierce the thorn.

Was it easy to forget?

As simple as a new distraction,

smoke and Moscato?

 

Can one life change another,

walk away and remain the same;

repeating tired cycles,

playing familiar tables,

ignoring the blood on their shoes?

 

Insignificance is worse than heartache,

indifference, the most excruciating pain.

© 2012 icaros13


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icaros13
Indulged in a weak moment of self pity...

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. expression is the key to transcending all emotions that are not needed ... in fact, they're needed because they need to be expressed ... being human is about exploring significance and insignificance ... here's to finding the significance of insignificance ... especially in exquisite poetry ... such as this post ... absolutely powerful and poignant work ... unforgettable ...

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reading your poetry makes me look over my shoulder a little, are you really peering into my world?

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've been wondering and doing the same thing myself of late, we seem to be literally be going through the same emotions, "Insignificance is worse than heartache,
indifference, the most excruciating pain." that is expressed so perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


icaros13

12 Years Ago

I, too, think we are going through the same emotions....I could pick that up from your writing as we.. read more
Corset

12 Years Ago

it's does my friend, sucks is definitely the operative word!
icaros13

12 Years Ago

The emotions, not your writing...
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. expression is the key to transcending all emotions that are not needed ... in fact, they're needed because they need to be expressed ... being human is about exploring significance and insignificance ... here's to finding the significance of insignificance ... especially in exquisite poetry ... such as this post ... absolutely powerful and poignant work ... unforgettable ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fading to insignificance. This poem hurts man.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Insignificant just feels that way.. but they are never insignificant..

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 11, 2012
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icaros13

Kansas, OK



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