I was trying to make good On the promise I made to myself I would write no more of lost love Or memories I'd wallowed quite enough, thought I Then in angelic script, casting an ethereal glow "I hear you're supposed to write what you know" Like the Voice of God on Sinai Emily spoke
I went to campus today, expectant, but not ready for the deluge of images and emotions that swept my feet from beneath me. The library, where we always met. The place we first talked about how our feelings had grown. There were ghosts behind every step. Shadows behind every door. Trying to run, I drove down dirt roads of altered perception. We had our first and last conversations on those roads. There is no escape today. Everywhere I look there is something you have touched. I remember the exact moment you touched it, and how lovely you were. Logic and reason tell me the right decision was made. Things are as they should be. My heart doesn't give a s**t about logic and reason. It just remembers.
I'm sorry for the display, my love. I am not responsible. It's Emily's fault...
Ladies and gentlemen, Ms. Emily Burns!! (enter applause here) Read her! Love her! Review her!....lol Thank you for your quick, cunning, sharp wit and your brilliant poetry, Emily.
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. what a beautiful piece of writing ... there's so much love in your words, monsieur ... i'm so glad that emily encouraged you to pour your heart out ... and write this magical and moving symphony ... when words as amazingly intense and vivid as this feel the need to be written, we should relent ... once again, excellent work and i'm really glad that emily helped you write the words that were longing to be written by you ...
When we have loved..Places, music, smells.. impact us so much...At times it is like a hand pulling our collar into the past.. Your piece has captured that moment & it is good to express it...gives that precious time a healthy place to settle..
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Today was the first time I have been back. I found that I smiled as much as I choked up...
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I understand that feeling.. ( ; You did well icaros13 ( :
I'm so glad you didn't resist. This is extremely beautiful. Sometimes we can't go back, but we can always remember
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I'm glad I didn't as well... I might have imploded. Such bittersweet memories I have had today.
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you made me think of someone too,
well, honestly, i would have thought of it anyway
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I know what you mean. It is always back there just waiting... then some poems bring it to the forefr.. read moreI know what you mean. It is always back there just waiting... then some poems bring it to the forefront and into focus...
i want to publish a book of poems that i might have inspired, would you mind? what name would you li.. read morei want to publish a book of poems that i might have inspired, would you mind? what name would you like credited?
For we have thought the larger thoughts
And gone the shorter way.
And we have danced to devil's tunes,
Shivering home to pray;
To serve one master in the night,
Another in the day.
..I do love.. more..