Am I?

A poem.

If I provide you with company...
Am I your friend?

If I provide you with love...
Am I your family?

If I provide you with shelter...
Am I your home?

If there's no me...
Then are you alone?

Author's Note

Say what you like, give me tips and ideas to make it better. i can take constructive criticism.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

I like it. It's much like the whole idea, if a tree falls in the forest and nobody is there to hear it, does it make any sound.
I think your words create a dynamic thought to muse upon and ponder just how one person truly attaches themselves to another and just how far the bond goes.

Thanks for sharing! Great Ink!
Aaron

[Dr. Wood ?]

Well, here goes, I think that it should end with ...'Then are you alone?
Nice writing though

[lilrissriss]

Thank you for the tip. Sorry I'm JUST reading it now. I change it and it sounds much better that way ^.^