Come Light a Flame

Come light a flame inside the soul, let it be one that burns to always make one whole. May it be full of love to give away, that changes the world from day to day. Like the sun that brings heat to the face of man, the work is evident through his tan. It leaves a mark, an impression brought to mind, a remembrance of a day that was well spent on time.

Reviews

[Zami Amma]

I love your sweet words.. I love your reference to the sun as your soul is so set ablaze. Your flow is phenomenal as well! :) I would've liked to see your sentences broken a little to match your tone, your flow.. as well as making it easier for the readers to feel it as well.

"Come light a flame inside the soul,
let it be one that burns to always make one whole.
May it be full of love to give away,
that changes the world from day to day.
Like the sun that brings heat to the face of man,
the work is evident through his tan.
It leaves a mark, an impression brought to mind,
a remembrance of a day that was well spent on time."

All in all this was very well written, I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing!

[Ian Craven]

Thank you so much! Your words are truly appreciated.

[Reason4Rissa]

Someone has to have intelligence and maturity to understand this, keep writing, your unique with it.

[Ian Craven]

Thank you!! 😊