Untitled

The doctors doubt the safety of your arrival.

I know you will be here.

If I can’t have you; life is not worth living.

I need you in this world with me.

Right here by my side.

Sweet baby,

Product of love,

You’re strong like your father.

Oh warrior in my womb: I need you to survive.

Reviews

[daydreamer]

It's a very sweet poem with strong meaning. I really like it.

[Zah Nita]

Aw thanks ! :-) I'm glad you liked it.

[Monster ^.^]

Why was your title Untitled? Is it because the feeling of anticipation cannot be explained my mere words? I'd like your thoughts on that one :)

[Zah Nita]

Yes, you got it! :-) I don't like putting titles to poems where such feelings exist, (anticipation, uncertainty, apprehension, etc.) Like you said, sometimes it cannot be explained so I left the title blank.

[Monster ^.^]

Splendid :)

[Christopher Booyakasha]

Aww. that a beautiful poem. It's cute. If I'm not mistaken I like how you mention that it was a baby your were refering to in the first and last line. Nice Job!

[Zah Nita]

:) thank you friend.

[Christopher Booyakasha]

You're welcome.