Smile

All you need to do is smile.

My heart beats fast

As your gaze meets mine.

The corner of your mouth raises

As you smile, sublime

 

Though it isn't just that

You tip my chin up

And whisper a small hymn

And thats when I've had enough

 

The corner of  my mouth rises

As I smile, sublime.

Matching yours,

Side by side.

 

 

Author's Note

Hopefully this piece made you smile.

Reviews

[Personne]

It did make me smile(: Very sweet and beautiful poem! I enjoyed(:

[Dark and Mysterious]

Short and sweet. I smiled :)

[ATG]

A short, but very sweet poem. And yes, it did make me smile.

[Seanne Tholltree]

wow pretty short but to the point,,great job

[Antonio Valentino]

it surely did.. it fit perfectly with my mood this morning..

thanks for share

:)

[DalainaRenee]

Nice job! :) I liked it!

[Aly Jones]

This was amazing. Short and sweet. Loved every word of it. :)

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Beautiful! I love it :)

[Becky]

It did indeed. Nice piece. :)

[zainul]

It made me smile as you hoped.
But, it also made me wonder thinking how you created such an awesome shape that might be thought for many things.

Wonderful work.
I will not brand it as the first poem of a new poet.
Got 100/100